Bài mẫu đề thi IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 28.01.2023

Bài mẫu đề thi IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 28.01.2023 là dạng đề Agree or Disagree về topic Advertisement. Trong đề bài này, các bạn sẽ cần thể hiện quan điểm của mình về việc quảng cáo có thật sự là cần thiết không? Vì nếu sản phẩm tốt thì khách hàng sẽ tự động tìm đến chúng ta mà không cần đến quảng cáo. Để nắm cách triển khai ý cho đề bài này, các bạn hãy cùng IELTS CITY tham khảo bài mẫu band 7.5+ dưới đây nhé!

1. Đề thi IELTS Writing Task 2

Đề bài: If a product is good or meets people’s needs, they will buy it. Therefore, advertising is unnecessary and no more than entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Agree or Disagree)

2. Dàn bài

Introduction:

• Giới thiệu đề bài: advertising
• Paraphrase đề bài
• Nêu quan điểm của người viết: partially agree

Body 1:

• Topic sentence: It is understandable why many hold the opinion that advertisements are unnecessary if a product is reliable and caters to customers’ needs. 
• Main idea 1: advertisements help customers become aware of products that are hitting the market.
• Explanation: Without advertisements, customers may not be aware of newly launched merchandise and therefore cannot access and take advantage of novel, improved features.  
• Main idea 2: Advertisements enable people to compare the prices and warranties of different products.
• Explanation: Customers can easily settle on the product that is economically beneficial for them.

Body 2:

• Topic sentence: Advertisements may appear to be unessential if a product is already high-quality and meets consumers’ needs.
• Main idea 1: Advertisements might not be needed for some products that only rely on word-of-mouth recommendations to boost their sales.
• Main idea 2: there are basic commodities such as food and gas, which need no advertisements
• Main idea 3:Unnecessary advertising can lure people into compulsive buying

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3. Sample Answer band 7.5+

Advertising is omnipresent and plays a crucial role in many businesses since it creates brand differentiation. However, some people believe that advertisements are needless if the product itself is decent and satisfactory for people to buy, and I partially agree with this idea. 

On the one hand, it is understandable why many hold the opinion that advertisements are unnecessary if a product is reliable and caters to customers’ needs. One of the foremost reasons is that advertisements help customers become aware of products that are hitting the market. Without advertisements, customers may not be aware of newly launched merchandise and therefore cannot access and take advantage of novel, improved features. As consumers nowadays are bombarded with numerous products serving the same function on the market, advertisements enable people to compare the prices and warranties of different products. Thus, customers can easily settle on the product that is economically beneficial for them.

Despite their benefits in our lives, advertisements may appear to be inessential if a product is already high-quality and meets consumers’ needs. Advertisements might not be needed for some products that only rely on word-of-mouth recommendations to boost their sales. In addition, there are basic commodities such as food and gas, which need no advertisements. Unnecessary advertising can lure people into compulsive buying. This is because advertising stimulates desires by manipulating consumer psychology, and those initial wants gradually become habitual. Therefore, if a product adequately meets the demands of customers, there is no need for advertisements since the use of advertisements could backfire. 

In conclusion, I believe that advertisements have an important role to play in informing  a large pool of consumers about the release of products and helping consumers find the most suitable product. However, advertisements are unnecessary for products that already have a name for themselves and meet people’s needs. 

303 words – Band 7.5+ – Written by IELTS CITY

4. Từ vựng highlight

• decent (a): acceptable or reasonable (chất lượng tốt)
• satisfactory (a): good or good enough for a particular need or purpose (vừa ý)
• cater (v): to provide, and sometimes serve, food (cung cấp)
• hit the market: become available for sale (có sẵn)
• warranty (n): a written promise from a company to repair or replace a product that develops a fault within a particular period of time, or to do a piece of work again if it is not satisfactory (giấy bảo hành)
• economically beneficial: using little money, time (hợp lý về mặt kinh tế)
• word-of-mouth (a): given or done by people talking about something or telling people about something (lời truyền miệng)
• lure (v): to persuade someone to do something or go somewhere by offering them something exciting (thuyết phục)
• compulsive buying: excessive shopping (mua sắm quá độ)
• stimulate (v): to encourage something to grow, develop, or become active (kích thích)
• want (n): need (nhu cầu)
• habitual (a): usual or repeated (thành thói quen)
• backfire (v): to have the opposite result from the one you intended (phản tác dụng)
• pool (n): a number of people (tập hợp)

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