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Bài mẫu đề thi IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 11.01.2024

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Bài mẫu đề thi IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 11.01.2024
Bài mẫu đề thi IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 11.01.2024

Đề bài

International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

Dàn bài

Introduction:

  • Paraphrase the topic 

Countries increasingly opening their doors to tourists has sparked off a debate whether the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages.

  • Thesis statement (state opinion)

While increased tourism offers numerous benefits, it also poses challenges that necessitate careful considerations. 

Body 1: 

Main idea: increased tourism has brought undeniable economic advantages. 

Supporting ideas:

  • Countries welcoming more tourists witness a boost in their local economies through spending on accommodation, dining, transportation and various recreational activities. 

=> revenues not only support the tourism industry but also have a profound effect on other sectors, thus fostering job creation and economic development

  • Exposure to different cultures and traditions deepens cross-cultural understanding, breaking down stereotypes and promoting global harmony

=> The interchange of ideas and perspectives between tourists and locals can contribute to the enrichment of both parties, creating a more interconnected and empathetic world.  

Body 2:

Drawbacks of increased tourism 

Main idea: it is crucial to acknowledge the downsides of the tourist boom

Supporting ideas:

  • Increased footfall in popular tourist destinations often leads to ecological degradation, exerting stress on delicate ecosystems and contributing to climate change. 
  • Overcrowding can lead to pollution, habitat destruction and strain on essential resources and therefore pose a threat to the attractions that draw tourists in the first place. 
  • The influx of tourists can strain local infrastructure and resources, leading to issues such as traffic congestion, waste management challenges and growing demand for energy.

Sample answer 7.5+

In recent years, international tourism has experienced a surge in popularity, fueled by the decreasing cost of transportation and the ever-growing accessibility of diverse tourist destinations. Countries increasingly opening their doors to tourists has sparked off a debate whether the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages. While increased tourism offers numerous benefits, it also poses challenges that necessitate careful considerations. 

On the positive side, increased tourism has brought undeniable advantages. Countries welcoming more tourists witness a boost in their local economies through spending on accommodation, dining, transportation and various recreational activities. This influx of revenues not only supports the tourism industry but also has a profound effect on other sectors, thus fostering job creation and economic development. Furthermore, exposure to different cultures and traditions deepens cross-cultural understanding, breaking down stereotypes and promoting global harmony. The interchange of ideas and perspectives between tourists and locals can contribute to the enrichment of both parties, creating a more interconnected and empathetic world.  

However, it is crucial to acknowledge the downsides of the tourist boom and one of the most significant concerns is the environmental impact. Increased footfall in popular tourist destinations often leads to ecological degradation, exerting stress on delicate ecosystems and contributing to climate change. Overcrowding can lead to pollution, habitat destruction and strain on essential resources and therefore pose a threat to the attractions that draw tourists in the first place. Additionally, the influx of tourists can strain local infrastructure and resources, leading to issues such as traffic congestion, waste management challenges and growing demand for energy. 

In conclusion, the merits and demerits of booming tourism are multifaceted and require balanced evaluation. While there are indisputable economic benefits and cultural exchange fostered by tourism, the environmental drawbacks must not be ignored.

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Từ vựng highlight

  1. surge (n): a sudden and great increase (sự tăng lên nhanh chóng)
  2. fuel (v): to increase a feeling or a type of behaviour or make it stronger (thổi bùng)
  3. spark off a debate (collocation): create a debate (tạo nên một cuộc tranh cãi)
  4. pose challenges (collocation): create challenges (tạo ra những khó khăn)
  5. necessitate (v): to cause something to be needed, or to make something necessary (khiến thứ gì đó trở nên cần thiết)
  6. influx (n): the fact of a large number of people or things arriving at the same time (một lượng lớn)
  7. foster (v): to encourage the development or growth of ideas or feelings (thúc đẩy)
  8. deepen cross-cultural understanding (phrase): create deeper understanding (tạo nên sự thấu hiểu sâu hơn)
  9. stereotype (n): a set idea that people have about what someone or something is like, especially an idea that is wrong (khuôn mẫu)
  10. harmony (n): a situation in which people are peaceful and agree with each other, or when things seem right or suitable together (sự hài hoà)
  11. enrichment (n): the act or process of improving the quality or power of something by adding something else (sự cải thiện)
  12. interconnected (a): with different parts or things connected or related to each other (tương quan)
  13. empathetic (a): having the ability to imagine how someone else feels (đồng cảm)
  14. ecological degradation (phrase): damage or change to the natural environment that is perceived to be deleterious or to have negative effects (thái hoá sinh thái)
  15. exert stress on (collocation): put stress on (gây áp lực lên ai/cái gì)
  16. delicate (a): needing careful treatment, especially because easily damaged (mỏng manh)
  17. strain (n): a force or influence that stretches, pulls, or puts pressure on something, sometimes causing damage (sự căng, sự căng thẳng)
  18. pose a threat to someone/something (collocation): create the threat of danger or harm (đe doạ cái gì)
  19. multifaceted (a): having many different parts or sides/ complex (phức tạp, đa chiều)
  20. indisputable (a): true, and impossible to doubt (đúng, không thể nghi ngờ)

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