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1. Đề thi IELTS Writing Task 2
Đề bài: Businesses always aim to make more sales. What are some of the methods to do this? Which one is the best method?
Phân tích đề bài: Với đề này thì yêu cầu kể và phân tích ra được một vài cách thức để tăng doanh thu bán hàng, cần đề cập đến cả một vài mặt bất lợi của các cách thức trên để sau đó làm nổi bật được cách nào là tối ưu nhất.
2. Dàn bài
Introduction:
- Giới thiệu đề tài: business.
- Paraphrase đề bài.
- Nêu quan điểm của người viết: There are some certain ways.
Body 1:
- Topic sentence: One practical approach is to decrease prices of products or services by lowering production costs.
- Main idea 1: Building plants in developing nations.
- Explanation: This can help reduce many costs.
- Main idea 2: Disadvantage: this way is not sustainable to some extent.
- Explanation: the low-wage workers are often exploited, environmental pollution.
Body 2:
- Topic sentence: Expanding enterprises’ scale is another method to be mentioned
- Main idea 1: Businesses should open more branches or outlet stores.
- Main idea 2: Disadvantage: financial risks.
- Example: Soya Garden
Body 3:
- Topic sentence: The most conventional and effective way is advertising on different media
- Main idea 1: The purpose.
- Explanation: Different ways to advertise.
- Example: Coca Cola
- Main idea 2: Disadvantage: increasing competition.
Conclusion:
- Khẳng định lại quan điểm của người viết: In conclusion, boosting sales and profits has been the main aim of most businesses. Business owners can increase their companies’ size or reduce manufacturing costs to achieve that goal despite some drawbacks. However, doing marketing is certainly the most ideal approach.
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3. Sample Answer band 7.5+
These days the economy of many countries is growing rapidly partly due to the emergence of a number of businesses. It is said that the ultimate goal of those enterprises regardless of their sizes is to increase sales as much as possible and there are some certain ways to do this.
One practical approach is to decrease prices of products or services by lowering production costs. Building plants in developing nations such as China, Cambodia or Vietnam is the most common solution. This can help reduce not only taxes, but also costs of human labor, operation and materials. Nevertheless, bringing such costs down is not sustainable to some extent. Firstly, the low-wage workers in those places are often exploited to the fullest in poor working conditions. Secondly, such factories contribute to environmental pollution in the local area as by-products are usually not treated properly.
Expanding enterprises’ scale is another method to be mentioned. It is recommended that businesses open more branches or outlet stores as it allows customers to have easy access to their products or services. There are also some downsides to this which include major financial risks. For instance, Soya Garden, which was not a well-known brand in Ho Chi Minh City, decided to establish more stores in many districts, but this did not did not work and they went bankrupt. This was partly because their average prices were too high and the Covid-19 pandemic took place. Therefore, it is extremely risky to implement this method.
The most conventional and effective way is advertising on different media. The purpose of this is to raise consumers’ awareness of the brands, therefore leading to a growing demand. Businesses can advertise on their own or hire professional marketing firms. By opting for the latter, marketers help them launch effective campaigns, produce impressive advertising videos and images. Take Coca Cola, which is a giant corporation as a typical example. They widely broadcast meaningful videos about their products in correlation with Tet holiday in Vietnam and gradually the drink becomes indispensable on this occasion. However, promotion is too popular, leading to increasing competition. As a result, it is not easy for companies to have outstanding and effective marketing strategies.
In conclusion, boosting sales and profits has been the main aim of most businesses. Business owners can increase their companies’ size or reduce manufacturing costs to achieve that goal despite some drawbacks. However, doing marketing is certainly the most ideal approach.
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4. Từ vựng highlight
- Outstanding [adj]: extremely good; excellent
- Indispensable [adj]: too important to be without
- Opt for something [v]: to choose to take or not to take a particular course of action
- Conventional [adj]: tending to follow what is done or considered acceptable by society in general; normal and ordinary, and perhaps not very interesting
- By-product [n]: a substance that is produced during the process of making or destroying something else
- Low-wage [adj]: used to describe jobs for which or places in which workers are paid little
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